For this assignment, we're supposed to create a sequence of images using photographs that tells a linear photo narrative.

I used a 7d canon that's why the quality's pretty good.
But anyway some comments from the class... Some frames are not needed, cos it just repeats the idea of her writing the letter.
The story may be too simple. (but my idea was simplicity and focus on the emotion.. maybe it's not strongly portrayed)
And one issue that i thought of was the words. But the actual words aren't that important so we agreed that it wasn't a factor.
Nevertheless, i will rethink this idea and maybe work out something else..
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I also totally changed this idea. The first one was too straightforward I guess, although I really like the feel and the simplicity of it.
For the next one, I decided to focus on a macbook because macs are awesome, and I also added a twist to it so it's not as straightforward as the first one. The story is totally different btw.

Final layout:

So this is about a guy who comes home with his new macbook and is psyched to use his new gadget. He plugs everything in and everything looks normal, as if he's working on a normal screen that looks as big as the desktop he has in the room, but in the end you realise it's a really tiny macbook! This is called macpaper air and it is about 6 inches wide or smaller. You can see the comparison to the desktop in the last photo :)
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